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Tuesday, 30 October 2012
The Worms Refusal
"This books revolting!"
Said the worm in a rage.
"I wouldn't be seen dead on a single page.
I'm off. I'm leaving,
and thats that.
Wait, no...!
don't slam it shut it shut yet...
Aaaaargh!" SPLAT!
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