Pupils had to write the poems in the pattern 5-7-5 syllables.
Can you check to see if they all managed to keep to the Haiku pattern?
Sam
Use this pattern please
Five seven five syllables
A haiku is great
Megan.
Scorching hot summer
Playing in the park all day
Hot is summer time
Esmai.
Summer time is fun
Playing at the beach all day
The sun is shining
Aiden
Fantastic summer
No school for six weeks yahoo
Playing football some more
Luke.
Summer time is fun
Playing beach ball on the sand
playing in the sun
Abbey
The summer is hot
Water pistols cool you down
Tanning on the beach
Tyler
Summer is the best
Its my chest is very red
End the holiday
Jamie
Summer is joyful
Summer makes me happy to
I love summer time
Vanessa
Summer is lovely
I love playing on the beach
Everyone can play
Shaelon
The Summer is good
Summer is family time
The Summer is warm
Daisy
I love the summer
I like to play on the beach
Summer is the best
Aaron
Summer days are fun
Eating ice cream on the beach
It is fun and hot
Alice
Nature comes to life
Children play in the warm sun
In the summer time
Domininc
Summer is so fun
Playing football in the sun
All day fun fun fun
Amber
I love summer time
Summer brings joy to the world
and makes it stay long
Hunor
Playing the beach all day
The summer is good
Playing in the summer
The summer play on the water
Tee-Jay
Summer days are fun
Swimming in the cold blue sea
Sun beats down on me
Sam
Summer is boiling
The sun gives us a heatwave
I love the summer
Jaydn
I love the summer
Climbing up trees with my friends
Kicking balls around
Matt
I love the summer
I swim in the freezing sea
I love the ice cream
Chelsey
Summer time is fun
Summer time is burning hot
I love summer time
Chloe
Summer time I love
Playing in he park with friends
Going to the beach
Betty
Summer time is great
Beautiful flowers growing
Brilliant summer
Marcel
Summer time is fun
Sun is staring down at us
It is football time
Natasha
Summer sunshine yay
Playing in the park all day
Flowers start blooming
Dylan
Summer is awesome
Water pistols spraying at me
Amazing summer
Marissa
Summer is so fun
Water fights are so awesome
Weeks and Weeks off school
Great poems
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ReplyDeleteMrs O Primary School Teacher
Hunor had 4 lines in the 5 7 5 format!
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