Tuesday, 23 October 2012

Luke 5 Sentence Challenge #3

The train is puffing and smoking
the dog is waiting to go for a walk
the plants are beautiful
the people are waiting to get on the train
the houses are lovely


  1. Fiona (Team100WC)1 November 2012 at 10:03

    Luke, I can see that you have thought carefully about the words which clearly describe different scenes within the picture - keep it up! Next time try to remember capitals and full stops for your sentences too.

  2. Wootton Primary (Team 5SC)8 November 2012 at 23:32

    Great adjectives, Luke. We felt like we were there! I love the use of short snappy sentences, but to make it even better try to put capital letters and full stops.

    From Wootton Primary DLs (team 5sc)

  3. well done luke that is great i give it 5 stars *****


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