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Saturday, 30 March 2013

100 Word Challenge

“Happy birthday!” I stood, stunned at what just happened. “Wow, thanks!” I shouted. My everyone there started coming up, giving me gifts. Half of them were Easter eggs, the other half, proper gifts. I hate having my birthday at Easter. Most people give you Easter eggs. Like I don’t get enough! Looking at all that chocolate started to make me queasy. Suddenly, I fell to the ground. Waking up in a hospital room, I didn't know what was happening. Slamming the door against the wall, a tall doctor came in. He came over to me and contacted me in the eye with his terrifying stare...
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  1. Anonymous31 March 2013 at 15:18

    Sounds a bit of a weird doctor.

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    1. Anonymous15 April 2013 at 19:16

      Yes, true.

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    2. Anonymous17 April 2013 at 20:13

      Almost as if he was not a doctor.

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  2. Anonymous8 April 2013 at 10:26

    Well done Betty , that was really good . Why not visit my blog page and comment . From Emily at Hillside http://emmymartins2.blogspot.co.uk/

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  3. Anonymous26 April 2013 at 20:07

    hey hey betty i really likes ths and may be you can write a next part xx

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