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Thursday, 25 October 2012
The house 100WC
Two boys went to play football in a park they have never been in before.
They saw a house,a strange house.
They decided to go in.
Inside the house there were weird things like eyeballs.
"What is that?"Asked one of the boys.
"Just sweets,"said the other one.
As the boys explored the house it became weirder and weirder.
They heard strange noises.They saw things in the mirror, ugly things.
Then they realized that it was them.
After that they went back home and never went to that house again.
They told their mum about their discovery.She was suprised.
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