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Thursday, 25 October 2012
Holiday
There once was a man with a family and he wanted to go on holiday, but his wife wanted to go on a tropical island, but he wanted to go camping. the children wanted to be near a beach and an arcades.after all the arguing they decided to split. the mother takes a child to a tropical island and the dad decided to take a child to a camping site, but when they got there the dad opened his bag and there was a lizard in it.
"What is that," exclaimed the child. It looked like his wife had put it in.
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