One winter night when my family was indoors snuggled up on the sofa . With blankets and dressing gowns over them watching the telly. The temperature dropped suddenly and the lights were flashing on and off, then they stopped and went BOOM!!! The lights popped and the telly popped . Lisa the oldest sibling went towards the telly slowly but carefully, pushed the on button cautiously . "Ouch," screamed Lisa with an electric shock going through her finger. Marge went to get some more towels to warm themselves up. Homer tried to call nine nine nine, but did not get through and the family died before anyone noticed.
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WOW, what an impressive piece of work Abbey. The vocabulary which you have used is really good. This story really grabbed my attention. Can't wait to read some more of your work!
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ReplyDeleteOh no! What a sad ending, Abbey!
Nevertheless, your story is very well written
and quite dramatic. Well done!
Kind regards,
Diethild