Friday 26 October 2012

100 word challenge

Lara got out of bed. Again, it was another typical boring day of school. She stumbled to the bathroom to get washed and dressed. Once Lara was done, she went downstairs to eat. After she had finished her breakfast, she grabbed her bag and ran to the front door.

Kicking the leaves, Lara thought she heard something. No one was there. She carried on going. The voice appeared again. Lara stopped. All of a sudden, a small talking thing climbed Lara’s foot.
“What is that?” thought Lara. The little creature stared up to Lara with his big eyes as it wiggled its nose.

5 comments:

  1. What was it Betty?

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  2. I love the way you vary your sentence starters and use short sentences for impact! Great!

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  3. What happens next

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  4. What happens next

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  5. I love your little creature!

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