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Thursday, 11 October 2012
The Halloween Woods
The Halloween Woods.
In the darkness the moon glittered around like a disco ball.
The tree branches shot out and looked like they were going to grab you.
Then you would also see a big black haunted ghostly house tryin to seek your death.
Wearwolves would houl so loud it would go down your ear.
You would smell a disgusting swamp smell like poo!!!
And all of a sudden you will a terrifying graveyard.
What would you like to happen next?
Please let me know in the comments
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