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Friday, 26 October 2012
100 word challenge
What is that? I heard a funny noise! Was it Puff the dog or Fluff the rabbit, I am not sure. It could have been Tough the cat or Stuff the rat. A party is what the noise was. There was Puff the dog, Fluff the rabbit, Tough the cat and Stuff the rat. Cheeky Chow the monkey and Clappy the cow had joined in to. Everyone was dancing and singing and making lots of noise. I was the only one who knew and i liked it that way. All the animals liked to party so they carried on dancing. Thats the end.
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