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Thursday, 25 October 2012
100wc the stray dog
As I walked through the fog I saw something and thought, what is that? As I walked closer it saw me and ran. I tried to follow it but the fog was so thick I couldn't see. Suddenly I couldn't believe it the fog had lifted so I beckoned it out of the woods. I said to it" It's OK I won't hurt you." It came out and I saw it was a dog. It looked hurt I walked up to it had lost a leg. It was a stray. I decided to keep it and look after it.
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