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Friday 5 October 2012

Haikus

Hi, these are some haikus I made up:

Night is wonderful,
Moon is nice and beautiful ,
Excellent great night.
                                        
Good morning wake up         
Beautiful sun is rising
Birds tweeting all day.

Brilliant mid-day
The warm rays of sun on you
It can be cold too.

Easter is in Spring
Chocolate and sweets to eat
It is getting warm.

Summertime is fun
Playing out all summertime
Holidays are good.

Wet rainy Autumn
Dry coats and wellington-boots
Freezing cold all day

Winter starts to snow,
Building snowman and riding
Christmas time is soon

Thanks for reading my haikus, please comment!
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9 comments:

  1. Anonymous5 October 2012 at 20:17

    I like these haiku's.

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  2. Anonymous7 October 2012 at 11:22

    I like the fact they are in order.

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  3. Anonymous8 October 2012 at 15:29

    Dear everyone that reads this page,
    I am afraid that I can't fix the summertime haiku, so that the last 5 syllables are not by the self. Every time I try to fix it, it won't let me. I am very sorry.
    Thanks for understanding.

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    1. Anonymous9 October 2012 at 19:08

      There is nothing wrong with he summertime haiku.

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  4. Anonymous11 October 2012 at 14:23

    yeah there really good betty there arnt anything wrong with the summertime haiku

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  5. Anonymous11 October 2012 at 14:25

    good work betty well done very well done

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  6. Amber Baldwin18 October 2012 at 17:12

    the summertime one is ok and please be happy well done

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  7. Anonymous10 November 2013 at 13:24

    I thought it was good

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  8. Anonymous10 November 2013 at 13:25

    i thought it was ok as well

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