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Friday, 2 November 2012

100 word chalenge



I can’t believe Kile is making me do this. Kile wants to make, what he calls a terrifying movie, but he is making me the ‘damsel in distress’, as he calls it. I can’t believe it! Why couldn’t I be the heroine or the scary monster, which terrifies everyone?

Its time to do the shooting now. Being the director, Kile decided to shoot at Green street, which is the creepiest street ever, after dark, because he said it adds to the atmosphere."Action!” Shouts Kile. Sarah starts the video camera and Harry, the monster, springs out from behind the bush. All I can see are two red eyes.
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10 comments:

  1. Heather from Team WC4 November 2012 at 22:21

    Very nice job Alice. You brought lots of excitement in your use of the two red eyes. Being the damsel in distress would be scary

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  2. Mimi5 November 2012 at 02:08

    Great job Alice, you have put a lot of description into your work.

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  3. Thomas N5 November 2012 at 07:58

    Well done Alice I really like your story and like the imagination you put into this.

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  4. Rohan5 November 2012 at 23:37

    I like the way you think Alice and you story is very creative and the use of adjectives was great
    Good Job

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  5. Alice8 November 2012 at 22:48

    Thank you!

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  6. Alice8 November 2012 at 22:48

    I'm glad you like my 100 word challenge.

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  7. Alice8 November 2012 at 22:48

    Thanks!

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  8. Alice8 November 2012 at 22:48

    Thanks, but I think it would be more exciting than scary playing the damsel in distress.

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  9. chloexxdaws16 November 2012 at 14:09

    its brill good connetives alice nice job1

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  10. Alice17 November 2012 at 11:27

    Thank you!

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