Mystery Man
It was a dark rainy night ,a man was walking down an alleyway. He heard a sound it echoed ,he tried to find where the sound was coming from so he could go and investigate.
On the way to find out what was going on he suddenly collapsed. After ten or fifteen minutes he woke up,and he heard the sound,he was still in the same place but it sounded closer.The man did not look the same but he did not know, he is an alien.Some lady saw him and shouted what is that ugly thing strolling along the roads of Norwich,Norfolk looking so ugly and dripping wet.
Great title. It really made me want to read your blog.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you refer to the noise as ' the sound'... It sounds scary!
Next time remember you don't have to squeeze in all of the details. Could you end on a cliff hanger?