Thursday, 18 October 2012

the oak tree

The oak tree
As tall as a tower, the old oak tree stood in the same place for 42 whole years and he still felt as happy as a king. It makes him fell sad when children kick and punch him, because he has feelings to. Also, it make him extra sad when people play with his children, the conkers,because they get broken and hurt. He always see children playing in the park next to him and make him wish he was a child. Slowly, he became decrepit and nobody loved him any more. 

1 comment:

  1. Poor tree! I think think this piece of writing will make people give more respect to trees. It had made me!


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