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Wednesday 24 October 2012

summer

 
summer
summer, summer why did you have to go
now i feel so low
summer was great
and i meet lots of mates
summer went fast
and i wanted it to last
summer please come back
and do not lack
summer comes and goes
and soon there will be winter snows 
 
 

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  1. Alice8 November 2012 at 22:48

    This is a great poem, but you need to make you lower case i's capital I's.

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