Wednesday, 24 October 2012


summer, summer why did you have to go
now i feel so low
summer was great
and i meet lots of mates
summer went fast
and i wanted it to last
summer please come back
and do not lack
summer comes and goes
and soon there will be winter snows 

1 comment:

  1. This is a great poem, but you need to make you lower case i's capital I's.


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