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Monday 19 November 2012

My lunch

A candy bar
A piece of cake
A chocolate shake


A jelly donut
A chocolate chips
Some gummy worms
And licorice whips

A cand cane
A lemon drop
Some bubblegum
and soad pop

Vanilla wafers
cherry punch
My mum slept in while i made my lunch



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5 comments:

  1. Alice19 November 2012 at 20:51

    I think this poem has already been created, but I like it.

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  2. Michal21 November 2012 at 18:01

    I know one of my friends made this poem but I like how you changed it

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  3. Katie23 November 2012 at 18:32

    brill like it

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  4. The Kids25 November 2012 at 16:09

    Esmai, if you use writing that someone else has written, you must point that out in your post. Then you can say why you like it and why you chose it. Also if it is from a post on someone else's blog, leave a comment to say how much you like it. Even ask them if is ok for you to use it.

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  5. Anonymous20 June 2013 at 09:54

    Awesome! Its so catchy!



    Ellie&Alisha

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