Wednesday 28 November 2012

Evil Power

This is a story about Halloween.The  children love Halloween, there parents hate taking them (Trickle Treat), because there is a relay horrible lady who almost killed her 5 year old boy,but he has moved out now she also smokes.

Chapter 1
there is 2 minis until school finishes the parent said
"we better take some steps back."
All of the children come running past to there parents.They was all really exited that school was over,so they could go home for Halloween.Some of the children was sad because they couldn't get to go (Trickle Treat) The teacher said to them
"You can all go home."
But first they had to watch what there PE teacher Mr MacDonald had.
He had a picture of 4 face and shouted"BOO!"



















So the children read 1 poem to the teachers that they had made up
"Lots of people dress up scary 
look out for the clown on the face 
knock on the door hide jump out and say BOO
that why you say AHH!" 
And they was all allowed to go home,when they was leafing to go home the teacher said
"Goodbye see you next week."
So they all when home at last.They was getting ready for Halloween when one of the children heard a noise, John thought it might be  next door to him.Then he knocked on his door.John opened the door to his next door neighbour,Tom was dressed up as a vampire.He had black hair fake yellow teeth and he had a pare of orange shoes that mad him look like a clown,John run down the stairs and opened  the door
"Hello." said John
"Trickle   Treat."Tom replied
John went up stairs and finished getting him selth ready.When John was putting his face pant on the noise that was there last time came back again, so he finished getting him selth ready.When John was ready he when down stairs and eat his tea,he rushed his tea so he could go Trickle treating when John had finished  his tea he said to his mum
"Goodbye."
when John was about to open the door,the noise that was up stairs come back again so John rushed out of the door.He knocked on his friend door to see if Tom was there.nobody answered so he knocked again suddenly a shadow appeared in the glass door.Tom was extremely scared,so he walked away from the and said to his friends
"   Have you seen Tom any where?"
before hi friends could say any thing Tom opened the door and said
"Hello is any body here."
Then John said
"Yes do you want to go Trickle Treat with me."
"Yes."  He replied
"I will just go and let my Mum and Dad know."
So Tom went to tell his mum and dad.When he shut the door.John mum opened the door and said to John
"Are you going to knock for Tom."
"Yes."he replied
Tom opened the door and said
"Come on lets go Trickle Treat."
So John and Tom went Trickle Treating.

Find out the rest of the story in Chapter 2 look out for it.

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