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Wednesday 30 May 2012



Creepy House Chapter 4!

      Slowly, they walked up the crooked old stairs and went to the door that they opened at first.
The banging started again.  As Molly touched the door handle, it felt cold. She and Ruby were petrified. Scared, Molly opened the crooked door.... There Bobbie was all tied up.


Ruby gasped with fright. They quickly untied her, the banging started again, but this time it was not the door.                   



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3 comments:

  1. Max B Glen Hills19 June 2012 at 09:06

    I love all of the Creepy House story and the way you can suggest how the next part of the story goes.

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  2. Nimra20 June 2012 at 09:25

    hi my name Nimra from cheetham community academy I like the way you make lots of tension in your story.

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  3. Anonymous21 June 2012 at 10:29

    thankyou
    :D

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