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Friday, 5 October 2012
100 Word challenge.
I stumbled cautiously out of my tent. Something bright was shining, making me squint. It was the boiling sun blazing down on me. As I swept my sticky blonde hair away from my sweaty forehead, I stared at the colossal mountain of junk. All of a sudden, something thing moved. I walked closer to see what it was. Nothing was there, until something jerked. Without warning, I fell to the ground, leaving my head hurting and injured. The junk started to grow... higher. Blinding me, I couldn’t see anything as the metal reflected brightly. I didn’t know what to do.
Thursday, 4 October 2012
100 word challenge
This is a skeleton pilot made out of old dump
This is a very tall skeleton it is about five or six times bigger than the people
looking at it.The skeleton had clothes on it the clothes had dull dark clothes.
It also had a very long tail about twice the size of a human.
The skeleton looked like a dinosaur.
The skeleton had goggles on the size of a person.
He also had teeth there was about twenty of them.
You could see his rib cage clearly.
At the back he had spikes which made him look scary.
This is a skeleton pilot made out of old dump
This is a very tall skeleton it is about five or six times bigger than the people
looking at it.The skeleton had clothes on it the clothes had dull dark clothes.
It also had a very long tail about twice the size of a human.
The skeleton looked like a dinosaur.
The skeleton had goggles on the size of a person.
He also had teeth there was about twenty of them.
You could see his rib cage clearly.
At the back he had spikes which made him look scary.
My top 3 Wii game ratings.
Super mario galaxy 2 is a game where you travel the galaxy getting stars so you cansave princess peach from bowser.
Rating out of 10 for difficulty:
10.
Rating out of 10 for fun:
10.
Over all rating out of 20:
20.
Bakugan is a game where you have monsters that you battle the computer with.
Rating out of 10 difficulty:
9.
Rating out of 10 for fun:
9.
Over all rating out of 20:
18.
Guinuis world record is where you go around the world trying to break world records.
Rating out of 10 for difficulty:
8.
Rating out of 10 for fun:
9.
Overall rating out of 20:
17.
the sad news about my dads dog part 1
Look out for the next part to see if he survives.
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Alaskan Malamute |
On Monday the 1st of October my dad picked me up from school so he could tell me about his dog Johnny Blaze. On that day I was very upset. He said that he might have to get put down because he has a heart murmur.Hopefully he won't get put down though. At the moment he has gone back to his breeder to see if he can survive.He found out when they done a full health check at his second shot.
Maxwell the story part 2
Part 2 of The Mystery
"Where am I ?", wispered Maxwell nobody answered. He saw flying cars also the had red eyes where the lights should be and vampire teeth under the car plate. Slowly, Maxwell walked over to a car which is just siting there, He mumbled," Hello, are you ok ?". Carefully, the red eyed car moved slowly towards Maxwell. Like a light bulb, a man appered out of nowhere and lazed the car, which burnt and RIP EVIL CAR!
What just happened Maxwell said in his head, the man answered," I saved your life because the car was going to bite you in to one of them, that means you have to do some thing for me in return nd that thing is you have to go on a quest to get home ."
Maxwell when throught the car doom forest, The fire hole cave and a jungle. He did'nt know where to go out then he saw a car making a sqaure hole just like his one did so he jumped in the hole and when he got back home he returned the blue minicooper ans sold all his cars to his school. and in the end he made £10.00. Maxwell never wanted to see another toy car again.
Watch out for a new blog post by Me Amber.
"Where am I ?", wispered Maxwell nobody answered. He saw flying cars also the had red eyes where the lights should be and vampire teeth under the car plate. Slowly, Maxwell walked over to a car which is just siting there, He mumbled," Hello, are you ok ?". Carefully, the red eyed car moved slowly towards Maxwell. Like a light bulb, a man appered out of nowhere and lazed the car, which burnt and RIP EVIL CAR!
What just happened Maxwell said in his head, the man answered," I saved your life because the car was going to bite you in to one of them, that means you have to do some thing for me in return nd that thing is you have to go on a quest to get home ."
Maxwell when throught the car doom forest, The fire hole cave and a jungle. He did'nt know where to go out then he saw a car making a sqaure hole just like his one did so he jumped in the hole and when he got back home he returned the blue minicooper ans sold all his cars to his school. and in the end he made £10.00. Maxwell never wanted to see another toy car again.
Watch out for a new blog post by Me Amber.
Night Description
The moon is shining,
the stars are glooming in the darkness
Cats and dogs are searching in the spartan streets.
No light can be seen just darkness,
but suddenly the lamposts all turn on
the sound of rustling leaves can be heard.
I take out a torch suddenly...
The moon is shining,
the stars are glooming in the darkness
Cats and dogs are searching in the spartan streets.
No light can be seen just darkness,
but suddenly the lamposts all turn on
the sound of rustling leaves can be heard.
I take out a torch suddenly...
Wednesday, 3 October 2012
The Goldfish Statue
by Alice
Shining like a golden coin in the sky, the sun looked down from the marmalade sky, sending beams of sunlight into the park. I checked my watch. Tea wasn't yet, although it would be soon. As the wind blew lightly, the trees whispered secretly to each other. The park was still and quiet as I slowly knelt down on the muddy banking.
Curiously I stared into the murky water, apparently the small pond was famous for goldfish, but mysteriously I'd never seen one before. Directly in the middle of the pond was a stone statue of a goldfish. Branches of the trees have covered the pond, so no sunlight could peek through, however the silvery scales of the fish still glimmered.
Suddenly something happened, something magical; the grey stone goldfish statue started to shrink! Not quickly, but slowly, simultaneously I stood up and gazed at it with utter surprise as its silvery fins started to wiggle and jiggle. The statue was now the size of a cupcake. I was so surprised I quickly sat down in shock. It leapt into the water. As soon as that happened hundreds of goldfish rose from the water. The difference was that these goldfish were gold, but the statue was as grey as a mouse. “Wow”, I whispered as the the goldfish dived into the water, sending thousands of tiny bubbles rising to the surface, like floating pearls.
Not long afterwards, they jumped magnificently out from beneath the water, carrying weeds and flowers in their wide mouths. Hastily they swam over to the stone goldfish. They bowed and gave him the flowers. I wondered why they were feeding the statues with plants and I peered into the water. Suddenly I slipped on the banking and tumbled dangerously into the pond. I made a colossal splash as I hit the water. The fish dived beneath the surface. Then they swam to a golden flower and used their shiny fins to point to it. I picked it from the ground and gave it to the statue not knowing what would happen next.
Willingly the statue took a terribly tiny nibble into a glowing orange petal. Unfortunately nothing happened. At that moment the clouds hid the suns beaming face, a gloomy, ghostly shadow swallowed the park. I took a small step back and dry autumn leaves crackled loudly underfoot. The wind stampeded madly past my face, leaving leaves swirling up my legs like furious ghosts.
Just then everything stopped; the silence was as loud as thunder. Glowing like an angel from heaven, the statue rose majestically into the humid air, then leaped magnificently into the pond. But now the goldfish was not grey it was as orange as the petals on the flower.
The next day the goldfish had vanished and a cold stone statue of a fish was in the middle of the pond. Apparently the pond was famous for goldfish, not many people have ever seen one,although I had.
The End
maxwell the story by Amber
The mystery
One day a child called Maxwell brought a toy. A blue car the toy was in fact, but when he brought it the shopkeeper didn't tell him what happen to the last person who brought that car. Maxwell is a 8 year old boy who is always playing with his cars. When his family come over for christmas he is always playing with cars, he dont even say hello to them
Maxwell was walking home with his new toy car pushing it down the road. When he got home he yelled," Mum mum i have got a new car, which is blue!"
Maxwell's mum came running down the stairs and mumbled," A new car what sort?" she got down the stairs and saw it was a blue minicooper.
Happily, Maxwell ran up to his bed room and started playing with his car on his race track. Maxwell's mum could hear Maxwell from down stairs doing his car nosies. Broom broom you can win the race Maxwell say. At that moment, Maxwell herd a car nosie, but his mum cloud not hear it. The car started moving it self in a sqaure shape and the floor became a black hole...
As quick as Usain Bolt, a storm of wind came and pushed Maxwell into the hole. Maxwell yelled," HELP HELP!", but nobody could hear him...
Find out what happen soon.
Maxwell was walking home with his new toy car pushing it down the road. When he got home he yelled," Mum mum i have got a new car, which is blue!"
Maxwell's mum came running down the stairs and mumbled," A new car what sort?" she got down the stairs and saw it was a blue minicooper.
Happily, Maxwell ran up to his bed room and started playing with his car on his race track. Maxwell's mum could hear Maxwell from down stairs doing his car nosies. Broom broom you can win the race Maxwell say. At that moment, Maxwell herd a car nosie, but his mum cloud not hear it. The car started moving it self in a sqaure shape and the floor became a black hole...
As quick as Usain Bolt, a storm of wind came and pushed Maxwell into the hole. Maxwell yelled," HELP HELP!", but nobody could hear him...
Find out what happen soon.
The Avengers Part 1
The Avengers Part 1
It was an extremely dark night when there was a huge crash of lighting and it was the deadly villain...LOKI the brother of the mighty thor. He tried to steal the tesseract from shield resident Nick fury...Nick fury began to assemble the avengers......consequently Nick fury assembled the avengers now they are on the quest to find loki so they can get the tesseract back from loki.
Loki is planning on world domination and he is going destroy the city if the avengers don't stop him. he is taking over people's minds. he is making a machine that opens a portal to asgard. they found Loki in germany,iron man and captain America caught him and took him to the helicarrier and they put him in a massive glass cage. After a while he managed to escape and then Thor got trapped and hawkeye made 2 of the engines on the helicarrier stop working and iron man started one of the engines again and they were up and running again. To be continued
It was an extremely dark night when there was a huge crash of lighting and it was the deadly villain...LOKI the brother of the mighty thor. He tried to steal the tesseract from shield resident Nick fury...Nick fury began to assemble the avengers......consequently Nick fury assembled the avengers now they are on the quest to find loki so they can get the tesseract back from loki.
Loki is planning on world domination and he is going destroy the city if the avengers don't stop him. he is taking over people's minds. he is making a machine that opens a portal to asgard. they found Loki in germany,iron man and captain America caught him and took him to the helicarrier and they put him in a massive glass cage. After a while he managed to escape and then Thor got trapped and hawkeye made 2 of the engines on the helicarrier stop working and iron man started one of the engines again and they were up and running again. To be continued
The slave ship.
Tightly, my arms and legs were tied to identical people. When I saw it, I recognized it.
It was a slave ship... As soon as I set foot on the dreadful ship, it started sailing. How I missed my family. I was absolutely anguished. How hard they hit me. I worked and cleaned all day. How wicked. All of my bones are showing because of that whip! When the warm rays of the scorching hot sun reached my bones, my empty stomach was rumbling viciously for food.
The inside of the ship was gloomy and bleak. All of us were squashed brutally together. When the ferocious ship crew came. they were staring at some of us. They kept saying stuff in languages that I did not get. As quick as a cheater, one of the crew ran to the captain of the slave ship. The strong captain of the ship came up to me and pick me up powerfully by the neck. His fierce eyes looking at my weak rawboned body. Firmly, he throwed me down, hard. He kept on pushing me towards a crooked plank.I don't want to jump of the ship. I wanted to survive. I wished that I didn't have walk the oddly shaped plank. What is wrong with me? I could be back home with my family!
As brave as a lion, I stumbled slowly down the plank. As I looked I saw another ship called the Almighty. Happiness grow on my face as I walked across. Now that the ship was coming, I could see a ladder on it. As the captain said something foreign that I didn't understand, the ship came by. Luckily, I grabbed the ladder and made the people think I fell off and lost my clothes! Happily, I got back to my home and my family in South Africa and stopped the slave ships from kidnapping innocent people.
My Dog Heidi
Heidi’s puppy life
date of birth : 24.4.2012
Gender : female
Born in: A big barn
Breed of dog : Golden Retriever
When we got Heidi she was about 8 week old.The first time she was as happy as a monkey and very friendly.Also when we got our dog she was very much missing her brother and sister also her mum .After she had lots
of fun playing with are family she was tired,so she went in the kitchen and went to sleep.When she was little she was a little bit white, but now she is golden .
After she was settling in she had a problem by not going outside for a toilets.Heidi was very lively and always nibbling are feet.Sometime Heidi
will take your shoe and take them outside..So if you want to come round mine hid your shoe.
Heidi had to have 2 injections,so she can go out on walks.After Heidi had her injection. she had to wait 1 week this because she was not ready yet.Now Heidi was ready she has be on lots of park.The first park that she enjoy was catton park.My mum was takeing her for walks.Sometime my Dad walk Heidi at waterloo park,but she get lots of rubbish like nappes,bin bag and food and more. Now Heidi have 2 walks a day she is a bit more calmer than she has be. Heidi love dog ,.because she always jumps up on them and bark,but some do not play with her.
The first day was a bit of a disaster,because heidi saw our cat mopsy and heidi was barking at it also heidi got close to mopsy,so mopsy clawed it near it eye.Heidi was a tiny bit bleeding,but she was still happy.
Heidi has just about learnt to go outside for a toilet,but still have some indoor.Now heidi have a cage so she can sleep at night.When she was first in our house she did sleep on my mum’s lap.After that she sleep’s on a pillow.Now Heidi is about 5 month and nearly 6 month.My Dog Heidi give you kiss on the nose but sometime bit you on the lips.
Heidi is the best dog ever and I hope what Heidi would have an happy life.
Chelsea
Chelsea F.C is the best team they won the Champions league and the F.A cup.
They have amazing players like Eden Hazard ,Fernando Torres and a very (very) talented goalkeeper P.Chech.
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Chelsea F.C is the best team they won the Champions league and the F.A cup.
They have amazing players like Eden Hazard ,Fernando Torres and a very (very) talented goalkeeper P.Chech.
Their manager is also part of their success.
He bought just the right players which are Eden Hazard from OSC Lille, Oscar, Marko Marin from SV Werder Bremen, Victor Moses from Wigan Athletics, Cesar Azpilicueta from Olympique Marseille, Matej Delac from SK Ceske Budejovice, Kevin de Bruyne from KRC Genk, Gael Kakuta from FCO Dijon, Ulises Davila from Vitesse Arnhem.
The youngest player they bought is Matej Delac.
The most expensive was Eden Hazard he cost 40 million.my hamster
my hamster always stare at me to come out, i called him daley because he always jump from the top of his cage,ive had my hamster for about 5 weeks soo c ute my little daley,im neaver bored because ive my best friend freind hamster daley
Tuesday, 2 October 2012
autumn haikus
As autumn leaves fall
The leaves trickle to the ground
The trees stay awake
Acorns fall from trees
Hazelnuts fall down from trees
Leaves slowly drift down
when autumn comes down
all of the trees leaves turn brown
school’s back in session
When the trees leaves fall
The ground gets covered with them
Creatures hibernate
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