Monday 8 July 2013

The first hunt

 http://www.youngwriters.co.uk/primary-school-competitions.php  link to young writers 100 word challenge                         

The first hunt                                        


  Antonio was the last of his family. And no idea how to hunt. but he needed to because living of coconuts was driving him crazy.Every night he wanted to hunt but couldn't with no weapon. nights afterwards he brought himself to do it so running through the jungle and he ran into a tiger most feared jungle animal. he ran as fast as he could and skidded on a rock it made a spark he did until he made a leaf on fire and the tiger burnt to death which was convenient because he ate the tiger mmm tasty.

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