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Bertie's weird day
One day Bertie decided to go out for a change. He started to jump up and down in the puddle and all of a sudden he fell in the puddle into another dimension!!! He felt nauseous and petrified. He looked around and all he saw was white "am I in heaven but i'm only seven!" He screamed worriedly. Then he saw a yellow light which he was curiously attracted to. When he reached the the light he fell through the floor into a pink puddle
of milkshake which sent him flying through the cloud onto his trampoline with broken bones
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