Thursday 6 June 2013

The Pied Piper of Hamelin

                                  The Pied Piper of Hamelin

   Hamelin had a peaceful atmosphere and was a beautiful town. The children played happily with a ball in the street. The smell from the butchers tempted the local dogs to sit at the back door waiting for scraps to fall in their mouths.

   Thousands of rats invaded Hamelin. They ate all food and the children can’t play in the town. The town was sad because the children can’t play happily with a ball in the street.  The Mayor of Hamelin said who ever gets rid of all the rats, get the bag of gold.The Pied Piper had a good idea. He started playing music from the pipe. All the rats followed the Pied Piper. The rats and Pied Piper went away. The Pied Piper showed the rats a big piece cheese. All the rats went in the cheese. Everyone clapped happily because the rats disappeared from Hamelin. The Pied Piper,went to the Mayor because, he wanted the bag of gold. The Mayor didn’t want to give the bag of gold to the Pied Piper and gave just a penny of gold. Pied Piper was really angry, and he got all the children and took them with him to a beautiful world with candy.

   The Hamelin remained without rats and with the Mayor. 



  The people of Hamelin called to the children to stop, but the children didn't hear. They followed The Pied Piper through the streets and over the river.

5 comments:

  1. well done did you copy this or now write it

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    1. Thanks Amber! I write that yesterday on the computer at school in the morning.

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    2. I can't copy something and I put here because is not my work and is not funny.

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  2. wow you have done lots of work cool


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