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Thursday 23 May 2013

The Pied Piper of Hamelin

Hamelin was a happy place. The children

played on the road with a skipping rope. The butcher, baker and the dressmaker had a good job. Suddenly one morning the butcher screamed she ran out side she shouted Rats invaded my shop. Ever body ran home ever one-shouted rats in my house. They went in the mayor’s house and ate his food. The mayor said who ever gets rid of the rat i will give a bag of gold. At your Service said the pied piper I will take the rats out of town and have the bag of gold.


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Location: Hamelin, Germany

5 comments:

  1. Anonymous24 May 2013 at 09:49

    Cool story!What do you like about it?

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  2. nicole24 May 2013 at 09:59

    amazing story who wrote it ?

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  3. Anonymous24 May 2013 at 10:17

    Nice one TJ it's very very good

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  4. Anonymous6 June 2013 at 09:55

    It's a really good. I like that. Well Done Tee-Jay!

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  5. Anonymous7 June 2013 at 14:23

    I like your work I think you have put a lot of work into it TJ.I also like your story tell me what amazing idea did you have to do this I just love it KEEP IT GOING.

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