story bird.
This is a link to story bird. please enjoy reading my story.
http://storybird.com/books/the-new-world-by-vanessa-billington-howes/
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Monday, 8 July 2013
Thursday, 29 November 2012
when will I see the sun again part one.
When will I see the sun again.
part one.
A little girl called sophie was sad.She thought when ever will I see sun again it has been gone like forever.
Is it because I have been naughty or to head big.In this story sophie will find where th sun has gone.
what will she do?
I must think of something she thought.I know I will look for it.So she packed all the food in the house and lots of water She told her older brother if wanted to come for a life time adventure. He said " of course I will anything for an adventure."So she told him how all about why she wants the sun back.
Now let the journey began.
thankyou for reading please send your ideas what Ishould write next.
part one.
A little girl called sophie was sad.She thought when ever will I see sun again it has been gone like forever.
Is it because I have been naughty or to head big.In this story sophie will find where th sun has gone.
what will she do?
I must think of something she thought.I know I will look for it.So she packed all the food in the house and lots of water She told her older brother if wanted to come for a life time adventure. He said " of course I will anything for an adventure."So she told him how all about why she wants the sun back.
Now let the journey began.
thankyou for reading please send your ideas what Ishould write next.
Friday, 26 October 2012
my flower 100wc
I woke up one morning and said to myself "I am tired!" Then I had a shower and also got dressed. When I went down stairs I found something unusial. I shouted "what is that!" It was a present from my family.
I opened it up and it was a flower what could talk and it told me it's name.
I ran away from it and it said " do not be afraid I am not here to scare you."
After that, I was not scared I was friends with my flower. I talked all day long.
My mum thought my present was brillant.
Thursday, 11 October 2012
The Halloween Woods
The Halloween Woods.
In the darkness the moon glittered around like a disco ball.
The tree branches shot out and looked like they were going to grab you.
Then you would also see a big black haunted ghostly house tryin to seek your death.
Wearwolves would houl so loud it would go down your ear.
You would smell a disgusting swamp smell like poo!!!
And all of a sudden you will a terrifying graveyard.
What would you like to happen next?
Please let me know in the comments
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