Friday 6 September 2013

Summer Haiku Poems 2013

At the start of each academic year, a new 6M class writes Haiku poems about summer


Here are lasts years and here are Haikus from 2010 (I can't find the ones from 2011)
Haikus have a pattern 5-7-5 syllables.
Have all the pupils managed to keep to the Haiku pattern?

Hayley
Scorching hot seagulls
Happiness ice cream sun cream
Salad screaming kids

Dillon
Jacuzzis are hot
People doggy paddle
Ice creams are so nice

Owen
Scorching relaxing
Cold chilled water sun sand
Everyone has fun.

Joshua
Hot beaches are cool.
Hot BBQ are burning .
Cold waves are smashing.

Jack
Drinking freezing cold drinks
Relaxing fiery fierce heat
Tropical weather

Zoe
Smile seagulls laugh
Ice cream shells picnics sun cream
Camping flip flops shades

Simeon
Holidays are fun                                                             
Having water fights all day                                     
Playing at the beach                                                    

Josh O
Refreshing ice cream
Cold water flowing freely
Chilling by the pool.  

Emily
Refreshing swimming
Kids filled with joy and laughter
Building sand castles.

Ash
Holidays are cool
Going to play everyday
Playing with my friends

Skye
Swimming all day long
Kids having fun on the sand
fast waves coming now

Kye
Waterfalls splashing
Ice cream selling for people
Grass turning yellow

Kirill
Holiday camping
Scuba diving ocean hot
Amazing funfair

Malachi
BBQs lighting
Relaxing with cold ice cream
Everyone has fun

Molly
Refreshing picnic
Relaxing holiday joy
Laughter all day long

Milly
Refreshing ice cream
Sand castles water slides waves
Playing happily

Alex
Holidays are cool
Super cold ice lollies
Swimming joy all day

Meryn
Refreshing swimming
Sausages on BBQs
Sun bath in the pan

Lisa
Refrshing ice cream
Playing ball at the seaside
Seagulls Flying

Charlie
Scorching sun boiling
We all become very hot
The BBQ burns

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