Thursday 13 September 2012

haiku



This my haiku.By Amber
school
school is sometimes fun.
lots of fun lessons a day.
lots of happy kids.




2 comments:

  1. You need a capital letter and full stop on your first sentence (This is my haiku. By Amber.)

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  2. done it
    :::::::)

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