ELLIE THE SURVIVOR 100 word mini saga

This is my 100 word mini saga.Please post your comments below

It was just another ordinary day in the Cocobana Jungle.Ellie the Elephant was strolling down to the River of Wisdom for a bath,suddenly she stopped and as she took a breath in her mother took her last.Ellie was heartbroken ,so she planted a tree to always remember a wonderful mother she always had.Then there was a loud shriek.The horrible poachers had caught all the lovable animals apart from Ellie the Elephant.To show her survival they granted her with a very special gift of Guardian of the Cocobana Jungle to protect all creatures and plants.

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Sprinkles

   My Hamster Sprinkles!!!

     
        Sprinkles was a cool hamster who done a summer salt of my bunk bed.Also she got out once and made it to the bottom of the stairs.(without getting eaten by my cats.)


One day I let Sprinkles out and put a bouncy ball on the floor.I came back and she was balancing on top of the ball walking around my living room.
It turned night time and I heard a squeak?I shot out of bed as fast as a cheetah,and saw Sprinkles she had been sick,so I knew she was ill.


The next day my mum phoned the vets and they said give her cheese and fruit,so we did and a couple of weeks later she died.(I'm not telling you how.)