Wednesday 23 January 2013

The Olympic race-swimming


The Olympic race-swimming

Waiting and standing until the race begin 
I'm getting quite afraid
With I win?


Crouching down into the water,waiting for the gun 
BANG!!!There it goes
Staring to swim


My heart is bouncing,I'm out of breath 
Come on legs keep on going!
I need to come first.


Just one last push,I pass 2 length 
Am i last,first,where am I? 
What's my time?

I stand right straight,proud and glad. 
Wearing my medal
An Olympic gold 

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