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Thursday, 29 November 2012
the mysterious world 100wc
One stormy night I heard something creek in the attic I went up and saw a box lying in the middle of the floor. I opened it and took a peek when suddenly i was dragged into a portal. It was a different world I looked around and it looked upside down the world was literally upside down. As I look around and i saw an upside down man which is really weird because his hat done all the walking. i walked over to him and asked,”Excuse but what year is this.” look out for the next part to see what he says
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