Tuesday 27 November 2012

Who saved the day p1

There was a peaceful world in the universe until meteor hit a man and turned him evil.
He torched the people making them slaves. There was a saying if someone done something bad
It is 'he got hit by a bad rock.

One day people were carring coal along a lane and then a glowing stone popped up through the ground and sucked a teenager in and he popped out with unimaginable strength and speed then everyone started to cheer and he took his group under ground because as quick as a flash he had an idea.

If you want to find out more wait for part two.   :)


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