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Monday, 8 July 2013
Danny the Champion of the World - a part from chapter 11
Danny's dad went poaching in the middle of the night. At 2:30 am, Danny woke up and saw his dad was not in the caravan. Danny took his dad car and drove to find him. He stop the car and shouted " Dad, where are you? ". His dad answer to him. After 5 minutes he saw his dad and his dad fell down a hole and broke his ankle. Danny help his dad to get out of the hole and went to the filling station. At 7 am Danny's dad call the doctor to get a ambulance and take him to hospital...
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