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Wednesday, 26 June 2013
It was summer in Antarctica and the men in black decided to find the rare flying polar bear.They were wearing very expensive leather shoes they with a curl at the tip which is good for climbing mountains.they searched everywhere but no flying polar bears in site,Until the spaceship they flew in started moving and shot up into the air. The flying polar bears were controlling the ship .Thats were there shoes came in handy as they climbed the mountain and jumped and hung onto the edge of the spaceship.they trapped the polar bears and flew home.
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