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Thursday, 11 October 2012
The Amazing spiderman
The temperature dropped suddenly, and there was chaos in the middle of New York ....lizard was throwing cars violently around the city, creating chaos. So Spiderman flew in to save the day. He tried to save the day but there was just no hope, lizard was to powerful. In the end spider man said to himself, "I have to save the day." Consequently lizard threw a car at Spiderman, but he amazingly caught it. Then spider man threw it back and it knocked lizard out cold. So then Spiderman killed lizard and saved the day as always.
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