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Tuesday, 22 October 2013
Emotions
Some times people cry and sometimes people luagh. People smile, people frown. They smirk and giggle, bursting with laughter. Screaming and shouting with anger and excitement. Trying to hold in every tear if happy or sad. People feel souicidal at times but I takes some guts to acitally harm them selfs. When bully's bully people self harm when it get out of hand people regret that to. People love. Love is a magnificent thing that fills people with joy, it brings happiness in people's lives. Hate is a bad thing, Hate can be used in many different ways. Then there is jealously, jealously gets poeple know where in life it makes them look bad and they end up alone or with poeple who aren't right for them.
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you use same words more then once or twice
ReplyDeleteAwww Emotion so sweets
ReplyDeleteHi Milly I love your writing
ReplyDeleteHi Milly I loved your writing it's so good.
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