one day i was at cromer pier and i thought would it be nice to be a fish.
A fish, a fish i would like to be
what a wonderful life it would be for me.
I could swim all day
even in may.
But the sad side of it all
makes me a bit mad
that sharks eat fish
with out giving them a wish.
So a fish life could be great
but i would rather hang with my mate
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What would you wish if you were a fish?
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