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Friday, 7 September 2012
Earthquake part 1
Earthquake.
part 1
Hey its Fred Figglehorn, pressing the keys on my apple computer,I tried hard to concentrate.All of us were working our hardest in the hot office I swept the sticky black hair from my forehead and reached for my glass of water.
Suddenly the offices all over Tokyo started shaking.I wondered if we were close to the epicenter where the earthquake started,we all knew it was an earthquake it was obvious.Everyone was panicking,but we managed to get out of building, even though it was even worse outside we didn't go back in because people were dying and falling in the massive crack that was occurring in the road.
It was horrifying,people were distraught about lost loved ones also family and friends were dying.
However Fire woman came to save the left ones and helped people off the roof ! Suddenly with her super strong strength she pushed the massive crack and cemented it back together.And that's the end of the gigantic earthquake in Tokyo, as fire woman disappeared into the deep blue sky.
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