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Thursday, 21 June 2012

Diary Entry

                                                                                                                                          30/5/12


Yay, I get a birthday party tomorrow, it is so exciting that I keep getting little tingles.
Everyone that I want to come is coming, even Uncle Allen is going to make it, who I have not seen since I was 5.  The best bit is the presents that I will be given. Mum said it will be the only one I get, so I better make the most of it, I hope it goes well.

                          

                                                                                                                                            31/5/12

Well the party went well (not), Uncle Allen got caught  in traffic.
Someone spilt Ribena on the sofa, I only got given socks and a Bratz bike ( I don't even   like Bratz!) and the worst bit is when I went to got my slice of cake, there was none left .
On the bright side at least I have a clean PAIR of socks to wear tomorrow.
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3 comments:

  1. Mr D Mckeown21 June 2012 at 10:43

    Wow that is amazing and funny JJ

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  2. humaira.s21 June 2012 at 14:25

    I like the puncuation and what you have talked about and you made the story interesting and i like the way you are still happy what you have been given.

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  3. humaira.s21 June 2012 at 14:26

    i like the puncuation and

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