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Friday, 17 December 2010
Santa Sweetie Holders
Friday, 10 December 2010
Stained Glass (Tissue) Windows
Monday, 6 December 2010
(Not Quite Symmetrical) Cotton Bud Snowflakes
Friday, 3 December 2010
Swedish Hearts
Friday, 17 September 2010
Summer Haiku Poems
In our first week back at school, we made haiku poems about summer.
Haiku poems have three lines and follow a pattern of 5 syllables, 7 syllables and 5 syllables.
Here are our poems.
I love summer days
When big flies come in my house
The sun is yellow
AW
Flowers are growing.
Lets go swimming in are pool.
Summer time is here.
A.C
Summer
Summer time is fun.
Flowers come out at summer
Summer is over.
BH
My holiday to London
I went to London
To see my happy daddy
For my holiday
BK
Summer poem
Now summer time is here.
The sun is out and shinning.
Everybody cheers.
CD
Sand looks like diamonds.
Waves are crashing on the beach.
Licking ice cream.
CH
Flowers are yellow
I like apples from the tree
The sky is light blue
CG
Sunflowers attract small birds
Sunflowers are fun to grow.
Sunflowers are very tall.
DK
Ice pop
I like ice-lollies
Strawberry, lemon
Vanilla cream too.
EJ
Flowers grow again
Sunflowers shine in the sky
Bees collect nectar
JR
A Fantastic Summer
Today is summer
Swimming pools are opening
Summer is the best
JJ
In the holidays.
I went to see young sharks.
I had a fun time.
KP
I went to Yarmouth
The sun was burning my arm.
The sun was burning.
LB
Summer
The summer is here.
I love swimming in the pool.
Lovely BBQs
LM.
Summer Times
Very warm today
Having a celebration
People are swimming
MW
Summer poem
Sandcastles are built
People are eating ice cream
Summer is here now
MT
I love swimming time.
Sun bathing is so good
I like ice cream too.
MH
Friday, 9 July 2010
They're Not Pets Susan
A farmer and his daughter where walking down to the shops. Suddenly they were hit by lightning. The lightning shrank them.
The Farmers daughter had a pet bee with her, which had not shrunk. The bee escaped out of its pot and attacked them.
“Step back, they’re not pets Susan!”
The farmer had his shotgun with him and he started shooting at the bee, so the bee stung him.
Susan called for help, rats came to help and they bit the farmer where he was stung. He got better, and then the rats left because they don’t like bees.
The farmer resumed shooting and then a bullet hit the bee and it fell down to the floor as dead as dead.
The farmer and his daughter were safe, but still small.
“What are we going to do now?” the Susan asked.
What do you think they should do next?
By S.P in 5m Inspired by Little People- A Tiny Street Art Project
Strange Story
I have not told this story to many people. It is a strange story and not everyone would believe it.
One fine sunny morning I woke up and there was a spell book next to me, so I looked inside it and there was one spell in the book that I had wanted to do for many years now.
So I decided to do it. It took me to a portal and I jumped in it and it sent me to some place and I did not now where it was. I could feel there was something bad. There was about five monsters, just standing there, but luckily there was some guns. So I killed all five of the monsters and I was safe. There were some stairs, so I walked up and there was a bedroom with some old man laying on a bed asleep.
I woke him up to see what was going on and he said there was some burglars and they let some monsters in the house to try and kill me so I ran up stairs and they could not get me up stairs finally the port opened and I jumped in it. It brought me back home so I went back to bed.
Thursday, 8 July 2010
Leaf
My journey as a leaf was scary. In fact it was very scary! But it was great fun as I met lots of new friends on the way. Little did I know on my journey that it would change my life and my view of the world forever!
I was just a normal leaf on a normal tree. I didn’t seem important nor not important. To me, I was a non-special normal boring leaf. I never thought of being special, nor thought I would become special.
One sunny and scorching hot day every one was by the river having a picnic or BBQ. My day was going perfectly, I was getting a tan that made me even greener and I was able to relax. To the sweltering people’s relief a gust of wind came along. Now you might think I would be able to hold on to the tree, but the gust was very strong and it happened so quickly it took me by surprise. That is how most leafs die you see. So people were happy, but while they were enjoying it, I was battling the wind. I thought I was doing well until just at the very end, when I let go at the last second and the final strong gust pulled me away.
To make my relief the wind dropped me in the river, which carried me away. You see the wind is our long time enemy. So just to get me really annoyed the last of the wind did a small wave to me.
Grrr, that wind, even thinking about it cracks me up.
So my day didn’t go so much to plan. I was half way across the river, I crossed a few waterfalls and a v shape valley. Mind you those waterfalls were very bumpy!
I found my self-going round meanders and eventually I was in the great sea. By then I was very tired, suddenly I heard some one talk.
“You got dropped in the sea by the wind to?”
I replied slowly as I was cold and shivering.
“ Ye…yes… how d…d… how did y…you… Know?” I said chattering slowly.
“ Well you’re here aren’t you? Me names twiggy. Pleased to meet you.”
“ L…L….L…leaf …”
“ Leaf, a nice name, come on, cling on to me.” By now I saw twiggy bobbing up and down. I clung on to him tightly for safety. Just then we were washed up on the soft golden sands of a beach. We were stuck there for days, just basking in the sun.
One day a little girl walking on the beach picked us up, she came running to her mum with us, they had only just finished packing to go home. The girl got in the car and the car made a loud bang. I presumed it was an old car. When the girl arrived home she put us in a box. We were happy in our box and lived to an old age with other leaves and twigs till we crumbled away into dust.
By C.B. in 5M