tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5021438634800455830.post626727608493982837..comments2023-06-18T14:57:02.052+01:00Comments on Kids@Catton: 100wc The Hunger Games PromosThe Kidshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13228700770816288547noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5021438634800455830.post-31945909312709544522013-07-11T21:57:15.991+01:002013-07-11T21:57:15.991+01:00Hi Natasha,
Although I haven't read the Hunge...Hi Natasha,<br /><br />Although I haven't read the Hunger Games, I enjoyed reading your 100wc entry. You have chosen some words carefully, such as creaked and slammed. Maybe you could have described how you felt when you were asked to be filmed?<br /><br />Mr Connor<br />Team 100wcAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5021438634800455830.post-90261140183889973022013-07-09T17:50:51.296+01:002013-07-09T17:50:51.296+01:00i didn't say about singing to a tree the hangi...i didn't say about singing to a tree the hanging tree is a songAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5021438634800455830.post-92039615067609518632013-07-09T08:04:01.041+01:002013-07-09T08:04:01.041+01:00I like your ideas how you brought the paragraph to...I like your ideas how you brought the paragraph together and how you said about singing to a tree.<br /><br />Try to improve your some of your scentences, by adding a WOW WORD.You can do this by getting rid of<br />Some words you don't need that much like and.<br /><br />I thought it was Extremely good though like I was in the story.<br />Vanessa 6m cgps.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com